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Post ID: 1969574 | REPORT dynamitekid123 Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 16:46:53
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-DK senses something-
DK;...Something's wrong.



I LIVE
Post ID: 1969579 | REPORT Glaceon Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 16:48:16
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D:*grabs Jets neck*

"you just never give up..."

*he throws Jet into Shadow*
~Keep Moving Forward~

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Post ID: 1969585 | REPORT Ninetailed Fox Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 16:49:00
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*moves out of the way in time and uses dark pulse*


"Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend."
Post ID: 1969589 | REPORT aquablade11 Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 16:50:07
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* enters reaper form*
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Post ID: 1969591 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 16:50:30
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*derek re-appears in the past, during the time when he was still human*
sam-" w... where are we...?"
derek-" the past sam, i wanted to show you something..."
sam-" and what would that be"
derek-" my crappy life. i want you to learn from my mistakes... while you can"
sam-" what do you mean while i can?"
derek-" you'll find out, soon"
sam-" can you at least let go of my tail. its really starting to hurt"
derek-" sure"
*puts her on his head*
*he walks to a small house in the middle of the woods and looks in the window. he sees to young boys, the older one beating the younger one. the younger one is on the ground, covering his face from the blows. he is bleeding heavily from the mouth*
sam-" whats going on?"
derek-" my older brother is doing his usual thing, making my life a living hell"
sam-" but why?"
derek-" because he was older, bigger, stronger, and my parents wouldn't do anything about it"
sam-" thats aufull daddy..."
derek-" this was the last day anyway"
sam-" last day? what happened?"
derek-" you'll see in a few hours. lets go get something to eat. i know you must be hungry"
sam-" well... yeah, a little"
*the head off towards the forest*

~a few hours later~

*derek and sam are sitting in the middle of a meadow, surrounded by a bunch of kricketune singing as he sun sets. the red rays from the sun make derek's feathers seem almost normal while at the same time, making sam look who is a pichu at the moment look orange*
sam-" what are we waiting for daddy?"
*he covers her mouth as his past self walks out of the woods*
*his past self is too far off to notice either of them*
derek-" hush sam, just pay attention"
*she nods*
*the past derek sits by a large lake and throws rocks across the surface of it*
*the ghostly image of a gardevoir appears on the surface of the water and floats gracefully towards him*
*sam notices that the past derek has a look of terror on his face but doesn't run*
sam- daddy... you look scared
derek- i was, but i've always been to brave and dumb to run
sam- yeah... i've noticed

*the gardevoir is talking to derek's past self, asking a bunch of questions about situations that he has been through*
sam- i cant hear what they're saying
derek- she is just asking me a few questions, stupid questions i might add. just a bunch of random stuff to find out what kind of person i am. what i would do or have done in my life.

*the gardevoir grabs the young boys head and turns him into a torchic*
*it picks him up and disappears*
sam-" so thats what happened"
derek-" we're just getting started"
*grabs her hand and disappears through a portal. they land in the middle of a forest in the early morning. the torchic is laying on the ground*
derek-" we need to hide. i don't want to be seen"
*they jump into a tree as a young pikachu walks by and leans over the torchic. it starts talking to him*
derek- i think we can skip this part. it really doesn't get interesting for a few more days
sam- aww... but i wanna-

*he glares at sam and she shuts her mouth*
*derek grabs her hand and speeds up time. after a few moments for them, a few days have passed. they jump out of the tree and walk deeper into a forest. they both hear a scream of pain and run towards the noise. after a few moments, they come upon a fight between the torchic and a gengar, ekans, and medicham*
pderek-" why do you always have to get in the way! why do you always have to hurt us!"
gengar-" because its fun. beating up you little pests is my way of venting"
*pmaria is knocked out on the ground. pderek starts wildly attacking them in rage*
O_O sam-" daddy, you were crazy back then"
derek-" i get that way when maria gets hurt... i guess im over-protective of her"
sam-" you must have really loved her"
derek-"..."
*she looks at him*
*pderek is standing over the three of them, covered in blood. he is panting heavily*
gengar- *weakly* "y... you're going to pay for... that kid...."
*he passes out*
derek-" come on... there's plenty more for me to show you"
*grabs her hand and teleports to a canyon*
sam-" where are we now?"
derek-" this is a place where a friend of mine used to live. her name was xatu"
*pderek and pmaria are standing behind xatu, poking her*
pmaria-" she won't wake up..."
O_o
pmaria-" think she's dead"
pderek-" i dunno... try tickling her"
pmaria-" WHAT?! she might turn around and open a can of whoop-ass on me!"
pderek-" so?"
*pmaria slaps him in the back of the head*
pderek-" okay! okay! we'll both do it on the count of three.... 1.... 2...."
*xatu screams loudly and turns around*
*pderek and pmaria hug each other and scream as if its their last moments of life*
xatu-" oh, would you two stop. im not going to hurt you. i've been waiting on you for a while now"
*they continue talking while sam and derek are a far enough distance away so xatu cant hear sam laughing her @ss off*
sam-" the look on yours and mommy's faces! priceless!"
>_> derek-" well, she was scary..."
sam-" what are you going to show me next?! you crapping yourself!"
*she keeps laughing*
derek-" no sam... what i am about to show you changed my life forever"
*sam notices a tear running down derek's cheek and stops laughing*
sam-" what is it that changed your life?"
derek-" deoxys"
*he grabs her hand and teleports into the clouds*
*sam lands on a fluffy but firm one. she starts screaming and cussing loudly*
sam-" how the hell are we not falling right throught these things?!"
derek-"...just go with it... i try not to ask questions"
*pderek and pmaria are talking to rayquaza as the clouds begin to shake*
sam-" whats going on?!"
*derek points up. sam looks up and notices a giant meteor heading towards them*
sam-" we gotta get out of here!"
*just as she says that, the rayquaza fires a hyper beam at the meteor. the hyper beam blasts only a small part of the meteor to dust*
rayquaza-" i... i... i cant stop it"
*pmaria starts to cry into derek's feathers*
pmaria-" we failed... the whole world's going to be destroyed"
*he leans on her*
pderek-" this is all my fault... im the one that was destined to do this... im so sorry i dragged you into this maria..."
*gardevoir appears in front of them*
pgardevoir-" this doesn't make sense. derek, you're suppose to be the one to save the world. i was told that by my master. this cant be happening!"
pderek-" im sorry gardevoir..."
pgardevoir-" i have to get you out of here. i cant let you die"
pderek-" im not leaving maria behind"
pgardevoir-" you don't have much of a choice"
*she grabs pderek and starts dragging him away. he is crying and yelling as hard as he can*
pderek-" no! you cant do this! i would rather die right here with maria!"
*the dissapear*
*pmaria is left on top of the clouds, crying. a large section of the clouds under her breaks off and he falls towards the earth. she lands on her head making a large crater. she is unconscious and bleeding heavily from the ears, eyes, mouth, and nose. pgardevoir appears by her and takes her away. they re-appear in a cave, far under treasure town. pgardevoir starts healing her as derek and sam watch quietly from the corner*
pgardevoir-" your body... its so broken. please maria, you're the only thing that makes derek happy. without you, he beleives life isn't worth living. you have to wake up"
*she keeps shaking her*
*sam starts silently crying*
sam- mommy's going to wake up... right?!
derek- not for a long time sam
sam- b... but...
derek- there is nothing left to see here. lets go

*he grabs her and teleports to pderek who is laying on the ground. derek and sam sit in a nearby bush as pderek wakes up. he starts crying*
pderek-" maria... why couldn't i save you... whats wrong with me..."
sam-" daddy..."
*pgardevoir appears in front of pderek*
pgardevoir-" im sorry derek... i couldn't save her... i have given you another chance at life... but sadly... the same thing will happen to this world soon"
pderek-" im never going to let this happen again... im going to find a way to save everyone... even if it takes me the rest of my life..."
*he starts crying again*
*sam looks at derek, tears flowing from her eyes*
sam-" i don't want to see anymore... i want to go home daddy"
derek-" me too sam..."
*he grabs her hand and teleports back to the present. they sit by the lake*
sam-" why did that have to happen?"
derek-" i don't know sam... but it ruined my life"
*she hugs him*
sam-" daddy..."
derek-" its fine sam, that is all in the past now"
sam-" daddy... do you still love mommy?"
derek-"..."
sam-" daddy, please. i just want to know"
derek-" yes sam... but i will never feel the same way about her after what she did. im with shadow now. the only thing still keeping me related to maria is you. i just hope this never happens to me and shadow"
sam-" i just want to be alone right now..."
*she walks home leaving derek sitting by the lake*
derek-" so many memories... all so bad..."
*he sighs heavily*
derek-" i just wish i could go back and stop myself from ever being born... maria would probably just stop me again"
*lays down in the grass and looks at the passing clouds*
( :P there, now ya cant say i never went into derek's past! oh, and just so ya know ^9322 freaking characters. hellz yeah!)
Post ID: 1969601 | REPORT Glaceon Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 16:54:00
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((...im impressed))

D:*it has barely any effect, even though its super effective*
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Post ID: 1969606 | REPORT Waffersforever Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 16:56:35
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((Wow Derek, that was pretty damn good.))
*Trarek is snoring.*

« Last edited by Waffersforever on 17th Aug 2009 »
Bow down to da Cookie Lord, lover of Steel types~<3

^Lubs to the mouse and Derek <3^
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Post ID: 1969609 | REPORT Ziggoratt999 Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 16:57:25
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(=O ..... O... Em.... Gee.... Dats a big post...)
*Garret floats around, lonely.*

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Post ID: 1969617 | REPORT Ninetailed Fox Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 16:59:19
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*uses a sucker punch*


((0_0 wow long post))


"Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend."
Post ID: 1969619 | REPORT Glaceon Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 16:59:37
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((i like the story behind it too, its excellent and provides a very stable background for Derek))

D:"this is my gift to you"

*fires a massive Dark pulse at Jet, it seems to suck the life out of him, and then Ducknoir holds a canister*

"now i have Jet...and you have a body...soo much for Jet"

*he dissappears*
~Keep Moving Forward~

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Post ID: 1969636 | REPORT kimmy456 Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 17:02:50
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*gets up*

Silver - I wonder what's going on in this day and age.

*looks around*
Post ID: 1969637 | REPORT Ninetailed Fox Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 17:02:57
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hey come back here


"Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend."
Post ID: 1969640 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 17:03:33
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(=D took me forever)
*derek starts to fall asleep in the grass*
*sam sits in her bed and cries a little*
Post ID: 1969644 | REPORT Ziggoratt999 Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 17:04:12
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*Garret sees Silver.*
0_0 "... Cra- GAH!"
*Chaos takes over.*
Chaos: "Silver!"
*Flies over to her.*
"Hey!"

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Post ID: 1969650 | REPORT kimmy456 Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 17:05:06
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*turns around*

Silver - Hey what's going on?
Post ID: 1969652 | REPORT Ninetailed Fox Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 17:05:19
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((has to be the longest post ever))

*moonlight wakes up*


"Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend."
Post ID: 1969654 | REPORT Ziggoratt999 Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 17:05:49
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"Not much. How've you been?"

*Shade nuzzles her.*

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Post ID: 1969662 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 17:06:48
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(=/ william said he made a longer one)
sam-" its so sad... what happened... if things got any worse, i might not have been born"
Post ID: 1969664 | REPORT Glaceon Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 17:07:13
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((i dunno about the longest post ever...but honestly its a good post))

*Jets lifeless body lays there while Dusknoir has Jets soul in a canister*

D:"ehehe"
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Post ID: 1969672 | REPORT Ninetailed Fox Posted at: 17-Aug-2009 17:09:10
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moonlight: I'm bored

*goes over to jet*


"Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend."
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