Second Reality: The Mistake and the Rebirth rp

"When I programmed my descreation and control of THE WORLD. I made sure of creating a hire code. A trump. Something only I had access to. I cannot fail."


Ziedi just laughs.

"Well, you did."

TIME REMAINING:Zero.

........................................................

The whole world shakes to it's core and stops, it's rotation halted. It becomes eerily silent, and the only thing that is heard is Garm's fighting and the breaths of the brother.

"What...did you do?!" he gasps.

Ero speaks up. "We ended you, pure and simple."

He cackles. "You? End me?! That's a laugh."

Carbon-"Brother, why must you fight it? It's over. You used to be so pure anyways? What happened?"

He cocks his head, realizing truth. "Power comes at a terrible price. But I accepted it anyways. I liked the control, and would stop at nothing to have it. The fear...I loved it." his eyes turn cold. "And I would never turn back, little brother. Deal with it."

Carbon looks at him, a look of slight disbelief on his face, but with still all the understanding of the world.

The elder brother looks at Herry. "But last thing I guess. Darkspawn, release."


Herry and Garm are dealing massive blows to eachother, each at their limit.

But herry stops, his eyes frozen.

Garm looks quizically.

Bit of Herry start to break of, revealing the inner truth of him. He screams.

"WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING TO ME?!" he drops down the ground. The darkspawn spell affecting him had been released. It's power no longer corrupting.

He shudders, and in a final burst, it's gone.

Everyone rubbed their eyes, the brightness affecting them.

What they see is a shock. They see the real brother, the one The Elder Brother had used to trick them earlier. But younger...Alot younger.


He blinks, and looks.

"Thank You, Rafael."

The moment of silence didn't last long though, Garm lets out a shriek. The shadow of the dark spawn and stabbed him in the back.

They all shout, but speechlessness follows.

Zieid starts to rush over, but Ero grabs him.

"No time pops."

The shield mechanims kick in, surrounding them in a protective pillar.

Herry though had went to attend Garm.

He smiles..."I'll heal him. Energy traversal!" He pours all his power into Garm, healing his wounds.

"But Herry...your health."

They say the attack kills.

"I'll be fine." But he starts to fade.

Carbon screams.

The world shakes again, convulsing, tuning itself inside once again.

They feel all them stretch too the barriers starting to crack.
"Hold just a little more..."

Rafael closes his eyes, his world crumbled.

"Take me away."

It goes black.

They all wake up somewhere in the outskirts of town, stuck in a field.

Ero stands up.

"Is it over? Like finally over?"

"Yeah son, it is."

Carbon, still sits, a despondent look still on his face. His brothers gone, and the one he actually had a chance to converse with gone.

But he feels a tap on his shoulder.

"Herry? I..I...I thought you were dead?!"

Herry just smiles. "I just couldn't give up all my tricks could I?"

The sun sets on troubled world, one that was in a way, fixed.

The game was gone. It's coding permanently destroyed. The government had outlawed any full immersion game on the scale of the world. They didn't want another destruction like the one that had occurred. 7 million dead.... Who said games can't be deadly? But it all ended at the hands of few. And those who would never be forgotten.

~Fin~

Epliouges:

Ziedi (Dru Hanson) - Dru was offered many jobs in the gaming world, but he declined all. He couldn't stand to get sucked into something like this again. He focused on his family, and the physical world. He had a daughter, and watched everything that his own son played. He never picked up another controller again.

Synero (Ero Hanson)-Ero is still gaming, but not near as much as he did. He sticks mainly to puzzlers and Non-immersion shooters. At age 18 though, he became the youngest person to head Civics Digital Security, the massive corporation in charge of all happenings in gaming.

Garm-Garm has become a name held on high by hardcore gamers all over the world. illegal reproductions of the game that he was famed for aiding in the creation of are destroyed without explanation within a week after being opened for business. He has however, contacted none but Dru Hanson, and Justin and Herry Barlow, by email, separately and only once. all three email consisted of these seven words: "Thanks for playing. Have a nice day."

Carbon-Justin Barlow: He and his brother made and became Game designers and now ad a part into every single First Person Shooter Role-Playing and Action games made, they are currently working on a less...realistic version of the reality that they were in. Justin now has a wife.

Phoenix Lord: ((Herry Barlow))He lives with his son and daughter, as his wife was killed in the game. He works with Justin and hopes to accomplish the new THE WORLD soon. He enjoys decoding and hacks for the fun for the government on the side.

Ventus: Ventus hasn't been seen or heard from again. however, in a distant land, folktales have suddenly been begun to be told, new ones, of a mysterious entity guarding the poor, oppressed nation against the guerrilla mercenary forces in the area. Knowing Ventus, if it is him, he is using his stealth experience form the game to help those in his home country.


((You guys wann submit your own?))


« Last edited by Craizen on 2nd Feb 2011 »

Carbon (Justin Barlow ((i can't remember his last name in game)))

he and his brother made and became Game designers and now ad a part into every single First Person Shooter Role-Playing and Action games made, they are currently working on a less...realistic version of the reality that they were in. Justin now has a wife, and Herry, he lives with his son and daughter, as his wife was killed in the game

((Carbon Eagle Lol))

((nono that's my player name i mean the IRL character name))

((Name:Justin
What you are(shapeshifter, catperson, dual swordsman, heavy swordsman, berserker, assassin, or something along those lines, but no guns, or anything like that.): Heavy swordsman
extra weapon speciality(use of another class's, or type of person's, weapon): Very large two handed sword, with a dagger at the bottom of the hilt, the hilt is dark grey and the blade is titanium alloy
player username:Carbon Eagle
level:92
Bio:one of the greatest Swordsman known to man, he fights against all evil, no matter the costs.

That was your very first bio from the first one...))

((i updated in this one))

((Class: Brutal Shining knight (stronger the a berserker knight)

Screen name: Carbon Eagle

Real Name: Justin Almore

Bio: A Player/Programmer from the beginning, faithfully fights beside his Dragon and Zeidi, he is currently helping Zeidi get his son back

Description:Shining White armor with a, a helm matching his armor a Pure White Feather Dragon as a faithful familiar

Powers: Extreme elemental abilities, Summoning, Extreme Hand to Hand Combat Abilities, Dragon Speak))

((^... :o))

((sure thing.))


Ventus: Ventus hasnt been seen or heard from again. however, in a distant land, folktales have suddenly been begun to be told, new ones, of a mysterious entity gaurding the poor, oppressed nation against the guerrilla mercenary forces in the area. Knowing Ventus, if it is him, he is using his stealth experience form the game to help those in his home country.


Garm: Garm has become a name held on high by hardcore gamers all over the world. illegal reproductions of the game that he was famed for aiding in the creation of are destroyed without explaination within a week after being opened for business. He has however, contacted none but Dru Hanson, and Justin and Herry Barlow, by email, seperately and only once. all three email consisted of these seven words: "Thanks for playing. Have a nice day."

((Sorry to post in here guys, but can I assume that this rp is done and can be closed?))

((Yeah, it is.))

((oka. I'll close it then. Though I'm looking for new ideas for a new rp in the palaver thread.))