The Psychiatric Ward

"Lost in the Shadows of Life
Forever forgotten and
drowned in the depths of pain.
yearning for that spark of life
to know how it is to be loved.
Fall and fall, forever into darkness,
only to be lost, in the Shadows of Life"


My poetry isn't all that good.

Pretty decent Fluffy, and you've just given yourself your entire story. That poem is your centerpiece. It's up to you to explain the poem through an Rp story; Why you had your character say it. Only step left is setting aside time to tell the story you've come up with in your poem.

Left in the dust of past time
Awaiting the coveted light of lime
The one I had when skies were blue
And when roses sung of you.

How dare you leave me behind!?
I am NOT a toy of any kind!
And so I feel betrayed
Every day we used to say!

"I'll see you tomorrow, there's no doubt!"
How do you feel now, you horrid lout!?
Why did you break the promise you made me
Back when the winds were free?

Left in the dust of past time
But, no, no, I'll not whine!
For now it is time to play with YOU
Your heart, your life, your feelings, too!

I hope thoughts of me bring you pain
To your unworthy, insignificant, puny brain
No sympathy to you I'll loan
When I begin to break your bone!

By the time I'm done, you'll wish you'd died
After many a tear you'd cried
This for leaving me in the dust of past time
And the light of lime will rightfully become mine!


...................

I was WAY too nice. :|

« Last edited by Symmetry on 3rd Nov 2010 »

Pretty good Gabby. As I said before, you've just given yourself your entire story. Key is to not think about the story at all until you have that centerpiece of insanity. ;3

I have poem OCD in which I MUST have couplings in every one that I write. o_<

Poetry is fun, though~

eh, you get over it after awhile...Well, good night.

So did you learn enough to be evil in the Rp yet?

I hope so. :D

Night Craize.

Only thing left is for you to try it out sometime. I would suggest in the morning before you go to school, or when no one else is on. I generally think the poem up in the shower in the morning.

Already typing something up. Probably will post it before bed. I'm feeling pretty dizzy though...might not go to school tomorrow.

At least I'll get your company tomorrow, Fluffy. I help you any with all of this?

Yeah, I have ideas flowing through my mind. Thanks.

I think a lot in the shower, too. ;3

And I sing of roses and bluebirds and birdsong and colors and singing and I still haven't wrote a song ABOUT singing a song which makes me sad.

*Pets Fluffy's head and feels closer to Gabby.*
@_@ Thought I was the only one who did that...

Doesn't seem to me the kind of song you would sing tbh. ^^

If I listen to VGM enough times I start making up my own lyrics which I remember of ran hour before I forget again.

LOL Derek is telling me about this while I just won a Haiku/Rhyme faceoff on facebook.

.-.
I don't understand social networks.


In otherwords, Derek has me all depressed now :/

A new world, I wish to see come true.
A world hated and loved by few.
A world where terror and darkness reigns.
A world where demons feel no pain.
A ruler, I wish to rule this land.
At the top, I wish to stand.
Bring me to the upmost peak.
Give me this world, this world I seek!

;_; That's as good as I get.

« Last edited by Forgoten_Scars on 3rd Nov 2010 »

Derek, that world sounds like something I'd enjoy, really. I can't stand the sun or light because they make me rather sleepy. I'm more awake in the dark.

Me neither, Fluffy. ._.'

But apparently my Aunt is addicted to Facebook. Which is really creepy for some reason. And I'm not talking about the one I've in San Diego, either.

I'm not so good with poetry, either. At least, not that kind. I like focusing on happy things, really.