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The Psychiatric Ward

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Post ID: 2646736 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 16:19:27
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*Is banging his head on the car seat*
X_x
Post ID: 2646739 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 16:21:13
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*Is just now cracking open a can of Pringles.*
So nice. I haven't had junk food in ages. ;D
Post ID: 2646753 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 16:36:20
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>_<
I have to chose an expensive watch, no clue what one though.
Post ID: 2646755 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 16:38:43
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So people are just giving you stuff today?
Post ID: 2646759 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 16:41:18
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Damn straight, I feel spoiled today.
Free football tickets and a watch. <3
Post ID: 2646765 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 16:44:16
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Now you're starting to sound as well off as I am. ;D
Post ID: 2646776 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 16:53:11
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Such a nice watch too. I'll post a pic when I reach home.
Post ID: 2646805 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 17:09:15
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Hey Fluffy, stretch the Ben thing out for a while. I like where this is going. Play with his food and whatnot.

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Post ID: 2646814 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 17:15:46
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Done and done. <3
Post ID: 2646819 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 17:17:55
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Thank you~ If this hour goes by slowly enough, it might really get to her. I mean, what's worse than getting eaten by your son, becoming a playtoy who's so weak you can't do a single thing to stop it? :D
Post ID: 2646837 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 17:35:34
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Nothing really. What's worse than instantly being chosen to fall to your death?
Post ID: 2646839 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 17:36:56
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Dunno. Did the real Ben see that? And who's doing all this?
Post ID: 2646840 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 17:39:16
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Yeah, Ben saw it. And I have no clue as of right now.
Post ID: 2646841 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 17:41:58
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Oh well, just have to make Sam push it off as his bad dream when she gets back, feel bad herself, and find some way to make it up to Ben without him noticing.
Post ID: 2646846 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 17:52:44
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Oh it's not just Ben. Was hoping to make her atleast a bot softer in some way.
Post ID: 2646873 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 18:57:35
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Oh, you'll have to make this a week long if you want that. She's stubborn.
Post ID: 2646875 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 19:04:17
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12 Real pain
1 Pain of loosing both of her children
2 Pain of having your own child disown you
3 ??
Post ID: 2646884 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 19:41:54
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3 Pain of losing self - Take away what makes her HER. Like that Jolteon had his body taken away. Use lines that make her feel as if she's nothing. Here, let me try to remember and quote a few things that made it the worst.

*The small human boy feels a strange coolness that seemed to spread all over his body, relaxing him in a way. Though he knows a matter of great importance is going on, everything seemed to blur, making it impossible for him to notice much. His eyes quickly lose their focus, making his gaze distant. As time began to pass him by, the rest of the world seemed like only a faint memory to him, long gone, but still in mind. Everything darkened for him as the eyes of the Ninetales becoming all that was important to him. They rotated around him quickly, but never left his field of vision. Eyes looking at him from all directions at once, including those of Rai that were behind him.*
Boy-" It's so... beautiful... what's going...? It feels nice...."
*The Ninetales magic was working well on him, alongside Rai's spell that she put on him from her tail. For anyone on the outside of the boy's body, it would be clear that he was going under some strange transformation that no being should be able to go through. The rubber block that was jammed into his finger after having it cut off began to sparkle in a slight blue light. It looked almost as if it were made of moving silver. Once it wobbled enough out of place, it reached out and grabbed the boy's arm, working its way slowly up his body. His long feet and wide hands began to twist, pop, and bend into small paws. His face began to bulge outward, forming the short, sharp muzzle that would normally belong to a Jolteon. As this happened, his legs shrunk and rotated until they shaped the legs that would normally belong to a four legged animal. As all the shape changes began to come together, the boy looked less and less like a boy, and more like a dazed Jolteon. The transformation was FAR from complete, but he no longer looked like the boy that once was sitting on the floor. By now, the rubber was now covering his entire body, forming an almost full suit over him. It begins to merge with him, forming him into a living rubber being. Both inside and out have now changed to nothing more than rubber; bone, muscle, and organs dissolving away until they were no more. He now was more toy for Rai's twisted experiments than anything that should be left living on this earth. Now being completely reformed, the Jolteon began to come out of the Ninetales' spell, once again realizing what was going on around him.*
Jolteon-" Ugh.... w... what just happened to me... where am I?"
Rai-" Right where you were my boy... and you seem to have done a wonderful job in going along with our experiments. Well done Ninetales, you'll be paid the full amount if this doesn't fall apart like the others."
Jolteon-" But... what. Who falls ap-"
*He lets out a very loud, quick yelp as he looks down at his paws. He can almost see the floor below them through the slightly blue tinged, see through rubber.*
Jolteon-" But, YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME! N-Not ME!"
Ninetales-" We just did."
*The Ninetales places a paw over his mouth, chuckling a bit at the sight of the Jolteon.*
Ninetales-" Really, this is my best one yet. He looks so perfect. I think you're all the better for it, personally."
*The Jolteon's eyes widen, now in shock since he's just realizing he can understand what the Pokemon are saying.*
Rai-" Consider this my small gift to you. We've made you into something more. No longer will you have to worry about pain, or most other sensations for that matter."
*The Jolteon started hacking a bit, feeling an unquenchable thirst begin to form in his throat. Though Rai ignores him and continues speaking.*
Rai-" Your human self is long gone, only your consciousness is bound to this form. You could live forever if you want, but the rubber will degrade over time. To keep it fresh, you must absorb the timelines of others. You feel that dryness in the back of your throat? That's our magic at work. That's your body telling you that you're in desperate need of a soul to feed on. You need the time it holds, else your body will slowly fall apart on you."
Jolteon-" I feel so... numb... what is this...?"
Rai-" As I said dear boy, you feel nothing anymore. Sight, hearing, and the unquenchable thirst for timelines are the only thing your body allows you anymore."
*He slumps a bit, panting at the thirst, or at least mimicking the motions of panting as he tried to take in all that was said to him. As he has no lungs to breathe with anymore, he has no need to breathe. No stomach means nothing to eat. No soul means nothing to look forward to after death.*
Jolteon-" What did I do to deserve this....? I didn't mean to hurt you... please... just make it all stop. I'll give you anything, just give me my body back..."
*He pants more heavily, desperately trying to get rid of the burning sensation in his mouth.*
Rai-" I suggest you find someone to feed on, and fast. Ninetales, lets go."
*The Ninetales happily starts to trot out of the cave with Rai, leaving the rubber Jolteon behind. The Jolteon's body squeaks loudly as the rubber rubs against itself, him trying to lay down to weep to himself. His body can't even form tears for him to bathe in, only noise to prove he's still something in this world.*
Post ID: 2646886 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 20:00:18
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Which means this is where I cut it. Saturday was the needles, today was the Ben and Angel thing. 1 hour each day.


11 days is how long it's going to last. Or 9 now.
Post ID: 2646887 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 12-Dec-2010 20:02:21
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...Oh lord, that means I won't be able to use Sam for ages. =/
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