The Psychiatric Ward

Practice makes perfect Derek.
Also, that line sounds almost...singsong-like...Creepy indeed ._.'

The best way to do that is not to look guilty at all Fluffy.

I remember what was going through my head when I made that up a year ago. I was trying to get Rai to say that Eve was nothing more than a diseased little runt through poetry. Rai being the tree was tall and powerful. The leaf, also known as Eve, being the offspring that once was strong, but fell from the tree's grace and rotted on the ground. Since it rotted and crumbled away, Eve was no more than disease to the tree.

...I'm effed up in the head, aren't I?

Not at all, it perfectly portrays the message that you wanted to give off.

I just wish the rest of it was memorable. I made it up at 5 in the morning, so the rest of the poetry was just garbage. The first line was the only decent one. ._.

Will, help me make up a new second half to it. I remember Rai putting an hourglass filled with sand in the middle of the room, saying Eve would crumble to nothing once the last grain of sand fell.

Alright, let me start thinking, and maybe I can come up with something.

Hey do you think I should change my avatar?

Sure. Go for it Last.

Oh, and I found it through the wonders of Google... Wow, I was brain dead back in early 2010. I should have at least thought this post out for more than 5 minutes...

Ziggoratt999 said:

Forgoten_Scars said:

((I'm only going to guess Eve is still in the hospital.))
*The hospital is still cloaked in darkness seeing as it's early morning outside; sun not even in the sky yet. The only lights illuminating its insides are a few bluish florescent lights still lit on the ceiling. As soon as the clock on the wall strikes 3am, the bell on it starts to ding. One, two, but the third doesn't come. The lights hanging on the ceiling begin to flicker a little and dim, as if losing most of the electricity once running through them. Despite it being so early, an odd light begins to filter through the one window in the room Eve is in. A dirty red light, usually only seen if one is in an old house and the light is coming from a window caked in dust. The lights on the ceiling finally go completely out and all the machinery around Eve stops working. As the dirty red light hits the ceiling and floors, everything seems to age a little. Flakes of the ceiling start falling, coating the floor that's already getting rust marks on it. The bedding and sheets start to stiffen up and fade, leaving only rough metal springs behind. As the ceiling continues to turn to ash flakes and fall like snow around Eve, an odd singing noise starts to echo through the room. One of a small child, singing in melancholy joy.*
Rai-" The trees, the trees, they've lost their leaves. What once was life is nothing more than disease. They fight, they fickle, flurry and furl. They end their lives when sadness turns. The trees, their seeds. They have pulled them further than they may go. They break at the bends and tumble down like snow. What once was life is nothing more than disease. A fate so sad, will now be dealt with in ease."
*Black roots start to form on the ground, slowly growing until they cover most of the walls and the floor. One set twists around itself near Eve, forming into a slender hourglass with sand flowing through it*
Rai-" The seed, it pulls and fails to flee. Now the tree will crush something little as thee. The seed, it cries and to cut its creed. The tree will kill, no matter the plead. The sands of time fall freely for thee. They continue to move and refuse to heed. Take this my daughter, and know thy will. Your time will come, fade away sand still."
*With everything still in place, the light fades, leaving the room in shambles*

*Alex is still sleeping on the floor of the cave, holding Demi close for warmth. Seems he's still having problems with the cold unlike most Sableye*

*Derek is passed out in his and Shadow's bed, all curled up under the covers*

*Eve stares at the hourglass, fear in her eyes.*

*_*
Second half you said, eh?

Everything past the first line sucked. First line being "The trees, the trees, they've lost their leaves. What once was life is nothing more than disease."

ah the good/very bad old days.

*Puts a pair of black Eevee ears on Kim's head, then pulls out an hourglass.*
^_^ I say Kimmy dies when the sand stops moving.

*shots pollo in the shoulder *
you'll live I think

Yeah, go away strange person.

Forgoten_Scars said:

((I have to take a test for the majority of the morning. No one mess this up please.))
*Derek groggily looks up from his spot on the floor. Seems him, Alia, and Aura have landed in a cave deep below the earth, all of them tied up to a large rock. The faint glow of magma running down the walls illuminates the room a little, enough for him to realize that he's surrounded by thousands of demons, a good majority staring at him as if they want to rip the flesh from his bones. The putrid smell coming off of them is enough to make him gag. The higher sections of the room are lined with a faint, ghostly purple glow. There are hundreds of Spiritomb, all lined up and looking at the front of the cave. At the very top of a raised section of rock stands Rai, grinning as she hefts a bag onto a stone slab.*
Rai-" So nice of you to join us for the end of the world party. Boys, we've come through a lot, but finally our dreams will be realized. No more will we have to deal with the constraints of having light around. No longer will we be stopped from feeding on anyone and everyone. No longer will we be oppressed and thought of as the bad in this world. I offered you a new world order, and you've greatly accepted my offer!"
*She opens the bad, letting the four guildmaster's gems fall out onto it, still glowing with their strong power. Along with it, three jars, each containing what seems to be the screaming souls of Alia, Derek, and Aura. Laughing a little to herself, she takes another item out of the bag and stabs it into the middle of the slab. Its the dagger that her own daughter, Eve, is trapped in.*
Rai-" As a great group of psychotic clowns once said, welcome to the dark carnival!"
*Derek winces and huddles up a bit more as the sound of every last demon screaming in joy resonates throughout the hall. He starts shivering a bit more, feeling colder than ever as he looks up at Rai, far across to the other side of the room.*
Rai-" Oh yes, I will have my world back. I will be the ruler of all the light does not touch and stand with an even more ravenous army. I will look down upon the world and find every last person on their knees, begging for a mercy that will not find them. I will become the nightmares of all, now and forever more."

Forgoten_Scars said:

Rai-" Oh come now, we're just trying to make the world a better place! We're not alone, though. Your so called friends have been helping us every step of the way."
*She picks up the four guildmaster gems and tosses them into the air, making them hover in place. As she picks up the dagger that Eve is trapped in, the gems begin to spin in the air, slowly picking up speed.*

Forgoten_Scars said:

*Rai takes the dagger and tugs on the handle, pulling an orb of light from it. Contained within the light is all of the life energy that the dagger has sucked from Eve's soul. She tosses it into the center of the floating orbs, causing it to spread out and make them glow brightly.*
Rai-" A new world, I wish to see come true. A world hated by all and loved by few. A world where terror and darkness reigns. A world where my demons will feel no pain. A ruler, I wish to rule this land. At the top of all, I wish to stand. Bring me to the upmost peak. Give me this world, this world I seek!"
*The orbs spin faster, casting off rays of light and darkness, along with several clashes of lightning. The lightning strikes not far from Aura's head.*

I think I got SLIGHTLY better by the time the darkness came to the Rp in... October of 2010.

Sentences to long x-x

evil...that was a evil time in the rp....

Definitely, and I'm thinking of lines that rhyme yet speak the same message. So far for the second line, it starts similar to the first:

Line 1- "The trees, the trees. They've lost all their leaves. What once was life is nothing more than disease."
Line 2- "The trees, the trees, the leaves retreat, as they realize they must feast."
Line 3- "Upon the rouge daughter, which left the tree, and beget her power."

Egh, not very good. I need to think harder about it. X-x

aw Will, I didn't know you were a Poet xD

*Shrugs.*
But it's not that great :/

I have to go by by for now I'll be back

lol, it would be bad if i said i know, so lets just go with, its good ^^