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Post ID: 2879513 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:29:56
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Audience: A close friend who is unsure of what he should do.
Tone: Relaxed
Point of view: First person
Thesis: Sometimes it?s best to speak up, even if you feel it?s wrong to do so.
Pattern of development: Narration
Organizational approach: Chronological Approach

I. Knowing what the friend saw.
A. Bringing up a discussion in which the friend told me about the incident.
B. Telling them the best course of action.
C. Lead into short story.
II. Setting up a similar situation.
A. Give a setting.
B. Describe me witnessing the cheating.
C. Describe internal conflict.
III. Describe choice and consequences.
A. Detail decision not to tell anyone.
B. Describe how I was questioned by teacher.
C. Describe how I was scolded for saying nothing.
IV. Give summary.
A. Describe personal choice.
B. Explain what I should have done.
C. Explain what they should do.


...I've got the outline, but I still have no idea where to begin with the essay...
Post ID: 2879515 | REPORT kimmy456 Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:31:22
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have you ever written a essay?
Post ID: 2879516 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:31:47
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Yes, but it's been a very long time...
Post ID: 2879517 | REPORT Ninetailed Fox Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:31:48
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Start at the beginning.


"Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend."
Post ID: 2879518 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:32:18
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Thank you Liz. Your input is wonderful, as always.
Post ID: 2879519 | REPORT The last Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:33:20
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Did you write the outline
Any way I had the exact same papper
Spoiler:
click to reveal
what grde are you in?Eh


join my team plz
it's got a new rp
How do you spell typo
However the hell you want to
Post ID: 2879521 | REPORT Ninetailed Fox Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:34:13
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lol Oh come on it works. Try starting with the setting.


"Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend."
Post ID: 2879524 | REPORT kimmy456 Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:37:07
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Okay Start with the introduction Paragraph which consist of your Thesis and what the main point of your essay is going to be.

After the introduction you have your body which consist of 2-3 maybe 4 paragraphs that back up your Thesis statement with evidence from the reading or whatever you got the thesis from.

then the conclusion which is wrapping up everything that you have said in your essay.



on a side note I hate when i type fast, it closes the window and makes me post somewhere else... ._.;
Post ID: 2879525 | REPORT Ninetailed Fox Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:38:55
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Hi there kimmy.


"Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend."
Post ID: 2879527 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:41:37
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;-; My procrastination is getting to me....
Post ID: 2879528 | REPORT The last Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:41:50
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I could write it for you
But why would I? You need to lern on your own


join my team plz
it's got a new rp
How do you spell typo
However the hell you want to
Post ID: 2879529 | REPORT kimmy456 Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:42:39
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you can't keep doing that Derek it creates stress and everything else under the sun
Post ID: 2879531 | REPORT The last Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 18:44:52
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What?Eh


join my team plz
it's got a new rp
How do you spell typo
However the hell you want to
Post ID: 2879548 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 19:17:50
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Kimmy, shoot me. I don't like work.
Post ID: 2879551 | REPORT Squall Leonhart VIII Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 19:20:35
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*holds out a .50 caliber sniper and a shotgun to kimmy*

Post ID: 2879553 | REPORT kimmy456 Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 19:24:02
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*gives Derek a hug*
hugs are suppose to make things better.
Post ID: 2879555 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 19:28:12
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._.
*Pollo gets hugged by a horse.*
*Pollo takes critical damage.*
*Pollo feints and is rushed off to the nearest chicken center.*
*Kimmy gets nothing.*
Post ID: 2879557 | REPORT Glitters the Magical Pony Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 19:31:30
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*Kim got a two star rating.*
*Total Battle time: 5 seconds.*
*Target Time: 1 second.*
*Points of damage per second: 999,999*
*CP Earned: 1*
*Crystatarium Expanded to Stage 0!*

^Thank you Z^

Blazblue said:Kokonoe: Any normal player starts crappin' bricks the moment they see you.
Arakune: Ahahaha. Well they toned me down this go-around. I can only manage 9000 damage in a 160-hit combo!

9000 damage equals to 9/10th's of your healthbar. Toned down? o_0
Post ID: 2879561 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 19:36:13
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Eww, I read nerd talk. Make it go away.
Post ID: 2879564 | REPORT Glitters the Magical Pony Posted at: 20-Sep-2011 19:37:11
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I'm only reading from a FFXIII battle results page D:

^Thank you Z^

Blazblue said:Kokonoe: Any normal player starts crappin' bricks the moment they see you.
Arakune: Ahahaha. Well they toned me down this go-around. I can only manage 9000 damage in a 160-hit combo!

9000 damage equals to 9/10th's of your healthbar. Toned down? o_0
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