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Post ID: 3015546 | REPORT Cheat holder Posted at: 31-May-2012 07:07:34
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Gah, I was just watching portal. .-.


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Post ID: 3015547 | REPORT GLaDOS Posted at: 31-May-2012 07:10:07
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Mwahaha.

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JOHNNYBOLT said:Your avy's kinda sexy.
Post ID: 3015549 | REPORT Cheat holder Posted at: 31-May-2012 07:12:59
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...second mission name?...and the third? and so on?


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Post ID: 3015550 | REPORT GLaDOS Posted at: 31-May-2012 07:18:32
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Cheat holder said:...second mission name?...and the third? and so on?

What?

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JOHNNYBOLT said:Your avy's kinda sexy.
Post ID: 3015551 | REPORT Cheat holder Posted at: 31-May-2012 07:20:04
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Nevermind, nto gonna spoil it. Anyways.


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Post ID: 3015552 | REPORT GLaDOS Posted at: 31-May-2012 07:23:10
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Lisa, I've played Portal and Portal 2. Assuming that's what's you're talking about.

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JOHNNYBOLT said:Your avy's kinda sexy.
Post ID: 3015584 | REPORT Cheat holder Posted at: 31-May-2012 08:09:11
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Never hit submit. >.>


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Post ID: 3015611 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 31-May-2012 08:39:05
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Where are all the interesting people? ):
Post ID: 3015614 | REPORT CharizardMaster3300 Posted at: 31-May-2012 08:45:58
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Im banned from Youtube (by my parents rule) so im here



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Keyblade21 said:The world doesn't hate you. The world is just an idiot some times.
Post ID: 3015616 | REPORT kimmy456 Posted at: 31-May-2012 09:02:46
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Good morning how is people today?


i really need to stop staying up until 4 AM, makes me more tired during the day.
Post ID: 3015636 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 31-May-2012 10:55:15
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What do you do all night? .-.
Post ID: 3015637 | REPORT Cheat holder Posted at: 31-May-2012 11:00:55
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Who do you do for a Klondike Bar?

xD Slogans on random pop-ups.


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Post ID: 3015649 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 31-May-2012 12:59:04
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place is too dang quiet. ;-;
Post ID: 3015655 | REPORT CharizardMaster3300 Posted at: 31-May-2012 13:47:10
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Keyblade21 said:The world doesn't hate you. The world is just an idiot some times.
Post ID: 3015667 | REPORT Axionas Posted at: 31-May-2012 14:38:03
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GLaDOS said:Mwahaha.

YOU BROKE THE RULES!! YOUR BRAFIBEFGIABF!!!ADFBAKIBROKE THE URLES!!


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Post ID: 3015700 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 31-May-2012 15:38:18
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@_@ I dreamed up the most BA Rp story ever... but I'll forget it soon.
Post ID: 3015705 | REPORT Cheat holder Posted at: 31-May-2012 15:44:07
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Quick! Right Write it down!

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Post ID: 3015724 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 31-May-2012 16:32:02
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Already did. I gave it to Liz on PS.
Post ID: 3015742 | REPORT Ninetailed Fox Posted at: 31-May-2012 16:54:26
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Here I'll copy and paste it.

The main character is an outcast, has dark markings and is unusually strong. He doesn't remember much of anything from the past 25 years. He lives in the side of a cliff's bottom in a sea/rock villiage carved into the cliff, helping out where possible and staying to himself. Has a younger friend who is unusually smart.

Friend makes a machine that increases his powers, and also allows him to act like a ghost; turning invisible/flying/going through objects. The wrist band-like machine runs off of a sacred yellow liquid that an ancient race of monks used to make. They're long gone, and so is their dwelling, but some of it is still floating around the world. There's only a few flask fulls of it left in the world, but the younger friend thinks the stronger one should have it, in case he ever gets into trouble.

A few days later, the upper ranking family in the sea village that control the place get overthrown by the youngest son, who just wants power over the village. He and his personal guards go on a rampage through the village, taking everyone against their will, binding them with ropes, and making them kneel on the rock bordering the ocean's edge so they'll pay attention to him as he speaks. During the raid, the main character risks using his new device to get away and hopefully save everyone when he sees an opening.

When he activates it, he doubles over in pain as the device sinks needles into his wrist. All of the yellow liquid he had filled it with suddenly starts pouring into his veins. The device uses his body to process the yellow liquid into energy for it to work. Once he recovers, he leans up to find himself floating in the air. His body is a dizzy fade of colors to him, but it appears no one else can see him. He moves through one wall and looks at the villagers on the sea side as they're told to either accept this youngest son as the new leader, or be thrown to the water and never let back into the safety of the village - There's no other openings in the massive cliff for 30 miles, so this spells certain death.

The main character wants to help when he sees them come across his younger friend that invented the machine, but knows he'll be able to do no good against the mass of people. He feels an aching in the back of his head, as if he's being drawn away from the village by an unknown force. Accepting the fact that he can do no good in the village anymore and hoping everyone survives until he can find help, he wanders off to follow the tantalizing force drawing him. Even though the machine shows no signs of energy on it, he knows for himself that he can't make it more than a day on the small amount of thick yellow liquid he was given.

After flying off as fast as he can for almost a full day, he fades out of the top of a summit overlooking a vast bay - It's a place so distant that no-one has dared to travel there. To the right of him is an opening to the ocean. To the left is cliff, with a massive circular opening carved in it and surrounded by gold/jewels/all forms of decoration. The circular hole spans a distance large enough to fit a small ship through.

The feeling, drawing him to it, makes him unable to resist going into it. After flying through the hole for a few minutes, he comes out on the other side to what looks to be an ancient village, made into the rock like his previous one, but on a much larger scale. Hundreds of temples line the sides of the cliffs in the large bay. Ancient trees are growing from the rock, and a light mist above the water sparkles in the sunlight. The water below the mist seems to sparkle yellow with thin strands of the rare yellow liquid the whole world's been looking for. It's above all one of the most beautiful places he's ever seen, but it also seems so familiar to him.

The feeling in the back of his head pulls him deeper into the place, until he reaches one temple that looks like it's been scarred with machine marks. Once he's finally on his feet again, he rips the device off of his arm and falls to his knees, panting at all the energy it took out of him. Once he regains a bit of his strength, he looks up to see that there's old rusted green metal lining some sections of the ancient temple - 20 or more years old from the signs of rust and abandoned for just as long. Someone had been here, and defiled the ancient temples.

He walks along the open chambers of the temple until he finds the door he's been drawn to for the past day. It's scarred with claw marks and rust, which makes him uneasy. It takes him a bit to get the rusted door open, but once he does, a wave of stale are brushes past him. A dim light begins to flicker on, setting off a chain reaction of others, lighting the whole array of rooms within. There are large rusted tanks of the yellow liquid, dried marks on their sides from where they once overflowed and drained off into the bay to lace the water with the liquid.

From the sounds of it, there are still machines running within, though that's not what catches his attention. There are people in lab coats, thrown all over the place, and claw marks everywhere as if they were slaughtered. The people within the coats are mummified by now - Lacking all internal juices. Just thin skin stretched over bare bone so that they haven't decayed in all this time. One room in particular to the right is still making a lot of noise from the machines within. With extreme caution, he pushes open the door and peers inside.

Within is a small boy looking almost mummified himself, hooked up to a dozen different machines. One is life support, and another is extracting the same yellow liquid from his body. Memories long forgotten start to come to him, of a great struggle, of people being taken against their will by a dictator, of them being forced into this very room, of them being harvested for this yellow liquid that holds so much power. These memories are from him, as a captive. Of him being strapped down in this very room.

After a few moments, he realizes this boy strapped to the table is his true body - That this overly strong one he has now is must a manifestation of energy and sorrow made from the yellow liquid extracted from his body. He places a hand on the young boy's body and looks in sorrow, wishing he could unplug the machines and return to it, but knowing it would spell almost certain death for him and the village he's wanting to save.

He accepts the reality that now isn't the time to make his body whole again, and walks over to the sink of yellow liquid being pulled from his old body. Knowing it's his anyway, he takes what he can and recharges the machine on his wrist.

A few days later, the doors of the village's new management hall is kicked in by the main character as he comes to stop the youngest son from doing what he pleases with the ocean settlement and its people. With this, a fight starts, but it's soon realized that the main character may win - He uses gorilla tactics to disappear with his machine, then re appear to beat the guards up. Once he gets to the youngest son though, he gets grabbed by the neck and wrist when he tries to re-appear. The youngest son, rather than killing the main character on the spot, takes interest in the machine he's been using to disappear and sticks a thumb to the main character's head.

The main character falls in pain as the youngest son uses some form of powers to peer into his memories. He learns about the location of the ancient temples, and rips the machine off the main character's wrist. Taking it for himself, he leaves the main character and uses his own machine to go off in search of this same temple - To take all the yellow liquid for himself.

Realizing this youngest son may destroy the main character's original body and put an end to him, He runs out into the village to find his younger, smart friend. The youngest son had taken all his guards with him, so the village is theirs again. He eventually convinces his younger friend to make a new device so he can go back and prevent the youngest son from getting to the ancient temples and doing what he pleases with all the power.

It takes him a while, but the main character eventually gets the device made and uses what's left of his yellow liquid to trail after the youngest son and his ships. By the time the main character gets back to the temples, the ships are just now sailing through the opening to the temple's bay. He darts in after them, but doesn't fully catch up until the main character is at the door to the abandoned research labs.

They once again fight, but with a machine of his own, the youngest son easily wins out. Before he pushes a spear through the main character's neck, a loud earth shattering howl rings out throughout the temples. There are several loud bangs before a solid metal door is thrown off its hinges. Out steps a massive bipedal man-like wolf with a huge upper body. It has glowing blue ancient markings running all over its body, and what looks to be an aura of souls flowing around it. It's obviously something very angry from the time of the ancient race of monks - What they made with the yellow liquid harvested from bodies - What the yellow liquid was always intended for.

In a blind rage, it lays waste to the guards the youngest son had, and goes after the youngest son himself - It doesn't pay much mind to the main character. The youngest son is shocked when the massive sacred wolf being grabs him out of the air even in his ghost-like form and slams him to the ground. While the wolf being tears the youngest son limb from limb, he can't help but feel a connection to the wolf. It doesn't take him long to realize part of him is inside the wolf since his yellow liquid was harvested from his old body.

Even though there is a connection, he knows the ancient wolf will turn on him in time. Wanting to go on his own terms, he shuts the door to the room his old body is in. He rubs its head before pulling the life support away from it. The young boy's body struggles a bit, but soon slips away. The main character lingers for a few moments, but fades away himself, leaving the secret of this ancient temple and its bloody past to no-one.


"Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend."
Post ID: 3015751 | REPORT Forgoten_Scars Posted at: 31-May-2012 17:16:35
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What a terrible story. Boo!
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