Ninth Palaver

Woah... SUPER EARLY MORNING post by you... XD

I always liked that Noah Something... XD

I feel my horizons are already pretty broad, but thanks. XD :P

I was at work doing nothing anyway.

*casually kills anthony and drops picture on body*

I'm sorry, was that too difficult to do? It looks good though. I think that may be what I go with.

and sorry i wasnt on earlier. by the time i got home i figured youd be at work, but I basically took a four hour nap and then when i woke up i had stuff to do suddenly.

nah it was a piece of cake to do, and i work 4am to 1pm so yeah

Well, I guess i more meant i figured youd be asleep, then go to work.

Well... not to make that all meaningless, cause I do like it. But i was thinking about it, and i think what i want to do is portray an impending sense of death in the run, since taht's kinda of a central theme going forward. So... if you have an idea maybe could we take out the ring and the portal and do something iwt that?

Ooh... Death... I like...

Well, I'm never against death in a story. In fact... I think its basically been in every story I've ever written. And not just like an enemy death but something that affecctsa hero as a means of making them overcome. Plus it adds something I think and can help a reader sympathize. as long as your not G.R.R. Martin-ing it.

My Soul cal story is almost done. Probably will be tonight actually. I'm not... super happy with the end especially the second to last chapter, but I am happy with how its tail ending and finishing. It hink its strong.

EDIT: its done. I've finished it, I want nothing more to do with it than to post it. the end isn't as strong as the start, but I can live with it. after all, I'm not doing it professionally like you Sir Michael.

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so basically your sayin ur a terrible person got it, also i aint got any ideas so yeah

because I said I like death in chapters or because I said I was thinking of undoing that ring work you did.

And oka, well... nah, I'll stick with what you have there that final most one. thank you very much Sir L.

Anthony: Just do it professionally... You know you're the superior of this duo.

Well you already know how I feel about death: hate it when reading (because I'm a sob for a good ending), but can't help to include it in my writings.

I think you're over estimating my talents.

speaking of, I got my soul cal story finished and up online. Imm going to update it on tues and thurs, but its on three sites.

Or underestimating mine... XD

You think you could send me an updated copy? Can't wait to see how it ends.

oh I would never underestimate your talents, but true. Personally I think youre better tahnI am.

I don't knw I was thinking of just putting up a link to it and making you wait till its fully out. After all, according to Sir L i'm a terrible person ;)

I feel the same way, but about your writing. I think it's superior, and I often find myself trying to think like you. XD

Meh, I fine with that too. XD

Hey, have you seen that Zoey 101 Ten Years Later Video? So funny. XD

I appreciate that. THough you're holding yourself back. XD

No I haven't but i was never really into the show. I'm going to watch it that at some point, probably tomorrow. Spent most of the day catching up wtih a friend from college today.

If you say so. XD

Sounds nice.

So what else is new Sir Michael?

first time tryin sumthin a little new, opinions?

The white bloom on the left side seems a little distracting but it's very good.