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I've just submitted part three Sir Seth and Sir Michael. Same process as before.

Great part 3. Perfect finishing. I question. Is there a part 4.

Like he said, great way to finish that one! It's getting more and more gripping as it goes on! Nice way to keep you alive, as well.

Of course there is, I'm only a little bit more than half way done with the thing. Then there's occupation and its parts.(Finished about two weeks ago so you're not in that, sorry)and finally Extermination (Where you two come in.) I probably won't get to finishing tha until I type the first two though. As usual, I'll keep you posted. and try to finish part 4 tonight. If not, it probably won't be up til I get back after July 13, so maybe the fifteenth at lateest.

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Keep it up. Can't wait for the next one.

P_art four is turned in. Check it out, you know how.

Thriller ending. Can't wait for the next one when you get back. Just one question. Who died?

You'll see, no spoilers. I might have part 5 up before I leave. and it's not the ending. I can divide it into maybe,, three or four parts at most, two or three at least. It depends if I start typing three pages, instead of two.

I don't want to spoil it, (trust me). Also take you time, no rush. I can wait. Sir Seth is reading it as we speak. And where are you going?

YOuth group trip. we goto applalaciah and biuld houses. It's loads of fun. the work in the 90+ heat, tick threat, risk of breaking or losing a limb. the bug eating(Yes, I ate a couple live ones, I really cut loose down htere.), making friends, theme food night(its really good actually), and the friends made. You just got to love it. oh did I mention the poisonous snakes and pond/lake you can swim in?

Sounds great!!! Is it out of state? If yes where?

Can't tell ya, that would break rules. But yes it is out of state(out of Pa) I'llbe back in alittle bit, I have to get a shower.

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Sweet road trip!!! Signing off for the night (sisters turn). Have fun. I will Check for part 5 in the morning.

It won't be there. I haven't started typing it yet. and thanks, I always have fun for I am grasshopper-san(My first bug was a grasshopper. Ugly one too).

By the way, this year is apparently really bad for ticks. Every once in a while, there is a bad tick year, and this appears to be it. So, here are a few ideas to keep them away. Don't wear white socks if you don't have to. Ticks loooooove white socks. Also, if they start to get close, put a Downey fabric softener sheet in your shoe. That repels them. It has to be Downey, though. Now for removal. You know that old trick when you light a match, blow it out and then poke the tick with it before the heat goes away (or something like that method)? NEVER do that. Yes, it gets the tick off, but before the tick lets go, it vomits, therefore passing off any nasty germ it might have been carrying to you. Use good ol' tweazers.

thanks for the advice, Sir Seth. It will be used greatly. So, what did you think of the story?

It's good! The battle is finally starting! It's fun. Convenient how the battleground had doles in it, eh??

I figure that some divine force in the stoy's universe had to even the odds. ;]

Yeah. Did seem kinda overwhelming at first. Those poor noob soldiers...